1) What is the paper's thesis? Restate it in your own words.
2) Give at least two suggestions for additional information that would be beneficial in the introduction.
3) What are the main three topics of the paper? How can these topics be phrased better?
4) Give three suggestions for better transitions between paragraphs/topics. How can each body paragraph tie into the next one?
5) Are there examples to support each topic? Are the examples appropriate? Does the writer explain how they tie in to the topic at hand?
6) Where can the paper benefit from more vivid descriptions?
7) Does the conclusion make sense? Could it be expanded?
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